Thursday, September 14, 2017
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
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Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work. It does sound like the best day ever. I liked that you used lots of colour in your story. I was very surprised by the elephant bounding across the playground (great use of bounding!).
Something you could try to make your post even better is make your slide bigger and make the words go across as it is hard to read at times with one word on each line.
Thank you for sharing. I think it would be exciting if an elephant came to our school.
From Mrs Spragg